So, I’ve been a little quiet on the writing front recently. Some of you may have seen that I finished the second draft of my second book, and I felt so relieved that it was done, as at times it felt like a real slog, that I realised I needed a break.
While I tried to keep everything together, and balance the
travel, work and different living scenarios, it proved really taxing. That meant
that when the draft was done, I was nowhere near ready to do anything else for
Normally, I’ll blog more or work on some short stories, but
I couldn’t even face doing those activities, too – despite how much I love
A couple of months later and I’m back to it, so there’s some
catching up to do on my regular updates but also a lot of short stories I want
to redraft as well as some new ideas to put into writing. I know already what I
want to do for the third book of this trilogy and I’m going to start the first
draft of that story in January.
Compared to the first book, which I completed fully before
starting the second, this is also a little bit of an experiment for me. It will
keep the world and characters I’ve created fresh in my mind but in a different
part of their story. I’m hoping that when I come back to edit the second book,
it’ll be easier to keep track of everything, fixing mistakes and refining the
novel without as much back and forth and fact checking. I have a lot of notes,
but things do change during the process.
The other reason for doing things this way revolves around
my longer plan. I’ve been submitting the first book to agents since late 2017
and I’ve had no luck so far. That’s a shame but I’m not prepared to give up on
it, yet. All the reader feedback I’ve had (select friends and some strangers I’ve
met on during the travels – not all of which are science fiction fans) has been
constructive and positive.
Most of the questions they’ve raised are points I wanted
them to pick up on, the story and writing style are enjoyable and the
characters interesting. This is enough to keep me pushing ahead with it. If at
the end, I have no luck, I’ll consider self-publishing the first book once the first
draft of book three is done. Then I can edit book two while pushing that,
before editing book three while getting the second book out there.
There is a plan, and while it’s not going as I’d hoped right
now, it’s good to have some goals. Over the next couple of months, I’ll have
some new stories to send out and post, so you’ll see more of what I’m working
It can be hard writing all the time when things are so
unstable. I know some people who love that uncertainty, and to a point I do,
too. However, I do like a little stability. I like to know I’ve got a job or
can get one. I like to know I’ve got money to keep a roof over me and food on
my plate. There have been times during this adventure when those things haven’t
been so certain and it’s then I find it hard to sit down and write.
I spend too much time thinking about things that aren’t
writing. Life problems, you might say, in a sense.
Of course, everything is a wave. There are highs and lows.
Now that I’m on a rise, I can think clearly and put everything in perspective.
Sure, I can write a blog post or a short story at random
times but for a larger project, like the novel I’m working on now, I like a bit
of a stability. Which leads me to…
Getting into a routine
One thing I learned at university was a routine. If I could
write at roughly the same time of day (or night) each day then it’d be easier
for me to get into the flow and get more done. That has worked for me in the
past, but I do like having a set space to work from, which isn’t easy when travelling.
When you get regular hours at a job, then it becomes easier
to get that routine going. It might be worth writing at the same time even if
those times vary through the week. It’s training your mind to know when it’s
time to be creative and work, and that 9-5 mentality is exactly the same.
Seeing other people’s success
This is a double-edged sword but when you see friends and
colleagues doing well, you feel happy and want to support them however you can.
Then comes the jealousy.
It’s not that they’re better than you, but they have
something of market value then. That just means you have to think about your
ideas and what’s out there now. It also means you need to keep trying. Don’t compare
their journey to your own, just focus on doing what you do best and do it well.
One day, it’ll come to you.
Yes, I’m also telling myself that. We all need to hear it at
The occasional pep talk
I’m grateful for the friends I’ve got who keep me going when
things look hopeless. A lot of these are writers in similar situations to
myself, and I’m more than happy to return the favour. We’re all still young in
the grand scheme of things and it’s nice to get a little bit of encouragement
amongst all the rejection we get from publishers and agents.
The same rings true for life in general, and those uplifting
feelings can transfer to other areas when we need them most. If you know a
creative and they’re a bit down, give them some encouragement and offer some criticism
to help. You might not be an expert, but you can appreciate it. Let them
explain some of their craft to you, let them feel like their skills and
knowledge is valuable.
Again, the same is true in life. Look out for people who
could use a little lift. Good things can be passed on really easily.
Looking back to how far I’ve come
It may sound a little cliché but it’s great to look back at
where I’ve come from – in terms of my journey as a writer. I look back at the projects
I’ve completed and remember thinking that I’d never be able to finish it.
These aren’t masterpieces by any means but compared to my
writing now, I can see how I’ve changed, how my style has grown, and it makes
me proud. I look forward to pushing on and seeing where I’ll be in the future.
Of course, hopefully that involve a published book or two
(or ten, maybe more) but the more I travel, the more I learn about myself and
there are always things to do and learn. Maybe it’s not what’ll happen but
until I know for sure, I’m going to keep trying.
We all have problems. Some are serious, some not so much. How big or problematic they are depends on our view at the time and with the passage of time, they seem to get smaller until we wonder why it bothered us in the first place.
That being said, some are more annoying than anything. They can be ironically funny, blindingly frustrating, facepalm cringeworthy or many other colour adjectives. Writers are no different. So, here is a list of writer problems. It’s not extensive or comprehensive but they’re all problems I’ve encountered (and not always solved) as well as those of other writers I’ve met and spoken to.
Hell, they probably apply to many creatives and professions – but you’ll have to tell me that.
Pets like getting involved
Not much to say about this one but any writer with pets will know exactly what I’m talking about – our lovable companions just KNOW we need their help.
I can’t deny it’s true at times, but when I’m on a roll and my dog decides to jump on me or my laptop, that’s more hindering than helping. Still, wouldn’t trade her for the world.
Feeling guilty over a lack of productiveness
I’m starting with one of my favourites. I like to take a break between big projects and drafts. It helps me put some distance between what I’ve just done and what I’m going to do next. It can be a week, a month or even a year – it really depends on the project and how drained I feel.
So, FREE TIME! That’s what I tell myself. I’ll catch up on my favourite TV shows, go to some gigs, tick off a few books in the ‘to read’ pile and get some gaming done. Actually, no. Very little happens because I feel guilty about not writing or editing! So, I find other work to do, whether it’s planning something new – or related – to the current project, doing some redrafting etc. It’s great but everything else listed above, well those piles, lists and such get bigger. Who knows when I’m going to get around to them?
Oh well, I keep up with Facebook…
The anticipation of feedback
I like to think that I’m pretty patient while waiting for feedback. I do understand that people are busy and have their own lives and things to sort. That’s what I tell myself and hope it conveys that way to others.
However, on the inside I’m screaming ‘READ THE BOOK AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!’ every day until I get it back. Sometimes I can’t wait and I break my rule and ask. I feel guilty about that too. Thankfully, my writer friends understand that…I think…I hope!
The infamous writers block
I could write 1,500 essays on this subject. It. Is. So. Annoying. And frustrating. And has a particularly awful sense of timing. Countless are the times I’ve been on a great role and the one day it just stops. And I end up staring at a blank screen four hours searching for a particular word or phrase.
Sometimes a film, a show, a song, a book, a game, a word or accident can snap me out of it. Other times, I need a good sleep or swim to clear the head. Other times, I think it’s a way for the mind to tell us to take a break. Maybe to organise our thoughts or think about a problem – or just give us a rest. We’re not machines, we do need it every so often.
Knowing what you want to say without having the right words
Sort of related to the last point but how many times have you had the PERFECT idea for that scene or chapter that’s been bugging you for weeks but when you come to put it on paper or screen, you stall. It’s not a block because you know exactly what you want to say but it just won’t come out. Damnit.
This is a fantastic example of why redrafting is so key. I’m all about the flow of my work and stories but sometimes you’ve got to force past it and just get it on paper. The editing lets you find those parts and smooth them out to match the rest of the story. That doesn’t stop me from wanting to tear someone’s arms off when it happens, though.
Not being able to stop the inner monologue
Maybe this is just me, but sometimes I wish I could switch my brain off. A CTRL+ALT+DEL function would be amazing. Simply amazing. Someone do this and I will love you forever.
I find this more when I’ve been writing for a while or working for a long time on a project; I just can’t stop. I know I’ve got work in the morning or an early start for whatever reason – or I’m supposed to be meeting friends or family or whatever – so I stop writing but that monologue is just going on and on.
The worst part is, whether I cave and get up or return to it the next day, the ideas are gone. Potential writing gold gone for good. That’s when the facepalm strikes.
The conflict of how to tell people what you do
All is good, you’re at an event, seeing some friends and there’s new people around. You strike a conversation and then they ask you one of the worst questions ever; ‘what do you do?’
Where to even start with this? I write words and hope it’ll make me money is one option. I tell stories sounds childish. A writer sounds hipster and clichéd. Aspiring writer makes it seem like you’re trying too hard. Author? Not a chance, not till I’m published. Usually, I tell people I’m working on a book. They’ll either be interested and ask more or they won’t. It’s a safe option but why is it so hard?!
Not knowing when to stop
This is another favourite of mine. How do you know when it’s finished? The amount of times I’ve done the final draft of something only to come back in six months and let my inner voice yell ‘WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING, THINKING THAT WAS DONE?’ until I cave in and do another draft.
I’m not always convinced the new draft is better. Surely there’s a point where what you started with or tried to achieve has been lost through so many edits you have something new completely. Is it still one story or is it two? If I find an answer, I’ll let you know.
I saved the biggest problem for last. It is one of THE biggest hurdles any writer who wants to make a career out of putting words on paper can and will face – unless you’re incredibly lucky. If you are, don’t forget about this blogger/writer/Scot.
I’ve not explored this much compared to others but even what I’ve experienced I can liken to headbutting a brick wall over and over and over and over. And over. Repeat until brain becomes mush. Hunting down and acquiring an agent is much the same. And yes, I’ve headbutted a brick wall (a lot as a child and once recently to test out this experiment. It hurt. A lot) so take my word for it.
Any other big writer problems I’ve missed? Let me know!
I’m just kidding. Kind of. Regardless of how old you are, where you’re from or what you currently do, you’ve got a burning desire to tell stories and that just isn’t being fulfilled right now.
Maybe you’re writing something in your spare time; novels, short stories, poems, scripts and such. Maybe you want to but don’t know where to start. Well, I can’t tell you I’m an expert on the subject since, you know, I’m (at this stage but if you read this years later I may be) not a published author right now.
What I do have are experiences, insights and tidbits of information that may help in some way. I’m going to share these with you here. They won’t make you a writer but if it helps you pick up that pen or open that word processor, I’m counting it as a win.
What a better way to start 2016’s blogging than this? Precisely.
You’re a writer. Deal with it
Not everyone has a problem with this but it can come up every now and then. Calling yourself a writer – or having someone else call you it – is fine, but actually feeling like one is something completely different.
Maybe it brings a sense of pressure to produce or do something. Perhaps you feel guilty because it doesn’t feel like a job or bring the same stability other careers do. Or, you might just find it frees you and you can relax at last.
Whatever it is, you’re going to have to deal with it. It comes down to feeling comfortable with who you are, maybe not your entire being but this aspect of it. It might strike early on or later, but just remember, you’re not alone. Proof of being a writer doesn’t mean you have to be the next Tolkien, King or Rowling – far from it. Just be yourself, write the way you want to and, most of all, enjoy it!
Plan, plan, plan and plan some more
It’s dull, it’s boring, it’s mind numbing.
Sound familiar? Then you’re doing it wrong. Planning your work is the first step of a challenging, rewarding and enjoyable process. I love writing books but at the same time, short stories and blogging are hugely enjoyable. Each needs different levels of planning and it’s different for everyone.
My novels need a lot of planning. I develop characters, settings, plots and subplots usually before writing anything (although sometimes I write little extracts that do or do not feature in the story later). Once I understand the world I’m writing in, I start. My plan is usually a list of points per chapter and I play connect the dot. Whether you storyboard, mind map (or whatever the PC term is for it now) or use audio notes, it helps keep you on track.
Short stories need less planning but just as much research. Don’t fool yourself into thinking otherwise. On the flipside, if you get a flash of inspiration, go with it and then come back to your plans later, then work out how to use it.
Writing is actually fun!
Yes! Yes, it really is. It’s the most enjoyable part of it, but if you’re doing this solely to make money, turn around right now and pick another career.
Don’t get me wrong, we all (those of us who choose this) want to earn a living as a writer but if you’re writing for money, your writing will suffer because it’s not what you want to do. People are smarter than you think and they can see through the façade, so write honestly, about something you like and are passionate about, and the success will come.
I’m a great believer in the best job is the one you love doing, day in and day out. If you enjoy writing, whether its books, poems, web content, blogging – whatever – you’ll write better, build a bigger and more genuine audience and achieve the goals you want.
Don’t put undue pressure on yourself
It’s the ‘p’ word again – no, not publishing/ers. Pressure. It’s one of the biggest killers to any good story or project. If the pressure mounts up and you can’t deal with it, you’ll come across that infamous writers block.
I’m no believer in ‘writers block’ although I do use it as an umbrella term. There are a number of reasons why you might suffer from it. Pressure is one, tiredness and stress are others. A lack of focus or concentration, illness and many other factors can all stop you in your tracks.
Social media can be a big one. Too much time mindlessly clicking on Facebook’s timeline or Twitter’s newsfeed can destroy hours and days and – whoops – you’ve lost a week, then a month. That’s when the pressure builds. It’s a vicious cycle but if you put small steps in place to build a routine, you’ll get there.
Don’t get me wrong, some days you’ll write 20 words and others 5,000 but that’s okay. I try to write for at least one hour every day. The routine helps.
Find real feedback
This is tricky. Real, constructive feedback is essential to help you grow as a writer, and to develop your work. Other writers are great but they can often be busy. Readers are good but a reader doesn’t always make for good critic.
AVOID family and friends. They’ll have the best of intentions, no matter what you say to them beforehand, about what you expect and would like from them. You’ll get a “it was really good” or “I really enjoyed it” and that’s about it. Occasionally, you’ll dig and dig and dig and get a little nugget but it’s not worth THAT level of effort.
Find a writing group, in person or online – they exist everywhere. Follow the rules and be respectful. You won’t always like or agree with what they say but it’s for you to decide how to use that criticism. Throwing it back in someone’s face and going in a huff won’t help you and you’ll find feedback disappearing.
There are rules. Follow them or don’t – it’s your call
Every genre of writing has rules. So does every medium or format. Some people will tell you to stick to them at all costs while others will tell you not to worry and break them whenever you want. In the end, you have to decide.
It depends on what you’re hoping to achieve with your writing, the genre, context and so much more – it’s why planning and research are important. It will help you figure out which rules to follow (if any) and feedback will help prove or disprove your decisions. Be willing to adapt to meet the story and expectations of your reader to an extent. It’s a very fine line.
At the end of the day, it’s your call.
It’s. So. Much. Fun.
However, it’s essential. You’ve written your book or script or poetry collection and you send it off straight away, so proud you’ve done it. Now you just have to wait for the phone to ring for hours on end with publishers offering you deals. Right?
You’ll make mistakes – spelling and grammar included, no matter how hard you try to spot them – and there will be plot holes, lines that don’t make sense to anyone but you. This is why you need to edit your work. Read it over and over and over again, and then get someone else to proof it as well. The repeat. Iron out those mistakes BEFORE you send it anywhere. It might take a full year to do this. Be patient.
Publishing, agents and rejection
There’s so much to say on this but you are going to face more rejection than you are success – at least, early in your career. The worst thing is, it’s not always just plain rejection. Sometimes you hear nothing at all in the months you’re waiting. It’s awful but that’s the way it is.
Get used to ‘no.’ It might be in a nice way but that’s what it is. Dust off and try again. It takes many, many tries to get someone to even acknowledge you. So many writers have what could be successful books or stories and give up after a few no’s.
Bear in mind, a ‘few’ in this instance can be hundreds. It only takes one yes, however.
Hey, look! Homework!
There’s so much reading you can do, from people like me to the ones who have done it. It’s important to remember that you’re not me, and you’re not them. What works for one person won’t necessarily work for someone else so don’t get caught up on an idea if it doesn’t work out.
That being said, it can’t hurt to know about what people have gone through and use it to help, if you can. I’ve started you off, or given you some encouragement (or maybe I’ve put you off entirely – sorry!).
Either way, it’s a long and hard journey ahead of you. Stick with it and you’ll get there. Honest.